Is the prologue of my novel good so far?

i like the two main characters in this part, i find them funny. but what did you mean about how you dumbed it down, it reads like any other, i guess what i am trying to say is it sounds fine. when you ask does it have potential i cant answer without knowing what the rest of the book will be about. I like how you have written this, I read the twilight series and even though i didn't like the story it was written so well that it kept me hooked, in other words i reckon its written pretty well, i really don't know where im going with this so ill finish here......